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Elfin Elfin Series Book 1 eBook Quinn Loftis Bagley Designs Rachel Carr

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Elfin Elfin Series Book 1 eBook Quinn Loftis Bagley Designs Rachel Carr

One of the biggest problems I had with this book is that the characters all sound the same - royalty vs teen girl, thousand(s) year old vs 18 year old, etc.

The second problem I had was the mix up in homophones: hall/haul, site/sight, etc.

Otherwise, decent read. I felt the ending was a little anti-climatic.


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Elfin Elfin Series Book 1 eBook Quinn Loftis Bagley Designs Rachel Carr Reviews

This book started off a bit rocky. Very poor proofreading. The writing is ok... a bit contrived. The author relies on narrative exposition rather than writing skill to further the plot. This gives the impression that the story is rushed and “telly”. The plot is ok, a reasonable arc and ends on a cliffhanger, which annoys many. There’s insta love, which I hate and a very juvenile view of love and relationships, which could be attributed to the author’s age. I give this 3.5 stars because the book gets better as you go, though, it’s still an unsophisticated look at the trope of “soulmate”. It’s not like anyone is here for subtle exploration of deep topics so... 3.5.
This was more of a unique perspective on Elven kind than I have seen in a while. The characters were engaging, the plotline interesting and characters did do some growing, but not in large leaps, which would have been unbelievable. I have seen where some mention that ancient warriors/beings would not be able to adapt to using modern language. I would dispute that by saying that for a race to survive and be in close contact with a different realm that they would, as I feel humans would, be able to learn and adapt.

The reason for only a 4 star rating is that I would respectfully strongly suggest the author find a good proofreader, paid professional or not. Seeking to make money from your writing, it is the best investment you can make. I am one of those people who catches mixed homonyms and other spelling/grammar issues. I find it to be rather jarring. It takes me away from the story and keeps drawing my eye. There were not many of them, but those that were there was enough to pull me from the story from scene and I had a difficult time getting back to it.
The pace of this book was intense, I had a hard time putting it down, even though there were several things that bothered me. Overall it's a great plot with lots of excitement and romance. It could use a good deal more editing, though. There were several times I was pulled out of the story as I tried to figure out what was trying to be said. And this might be really weird but 'shined' was really bugging me I felt like shone fit better so I finally looked it up and shined is only for past tense of having done the shining, lol je spit-shined shoes. Also I would have appreciated less swearing. It wasn't horrible but I just don't like it or find it necessary. I'm glad there was some resolution at the end of the book, even though there is definitely more to the story, it's a good balance of writing a series, but still having some resolution. My biggest problem is a little bit of a spoiler - I'm not a huge fan of instant love and fated relationships. Love is a choice, there were some concessions to that, but it still annoyed me. Especially that there was physical pain if they were keeping themselves apart.
This week’s book is Elfin by Quinn Loftis. This was not one of her free books, but in her other series the first book was free which is how I found her. This book is what I would consider Young adult fantasy. I fell in love with her first series and she branched off into two other series, one of which follows the storyline of the first. Overall the Elfin series is about good versus evil and finding yourself and who you stand for.

I have enjoyed every single one of Quinn’s books. The first book introduces the characters in a new and fresh way. Quinn rights her books very cleanly without compromising the connection between love interests. You can feel how the characters feel for each other and gives you butterflies without getting graphic which some people do not like.

I am especially fond of elves, so I might be slightly biased, but this book is one of my favorites and I would highly recommend it. I give this book a five out of five stars. It is a feel good story and one of the few series that I actually enjoy. I rarely enjoy series because I am very impatient and I hate having to wait for the next book. This first book is a perfect start to the series and makes you eager to read more. Some reviewers felt the story was forced but I actually enjoyed it and nothing was bad enough to pull me out of the story.

I love each of the characters and felt they were well developed. The main girl acted a bit young at times but it was expected at least from me since it was in the young adult genre. I never expected any of the characters to be extremely mature, but they were not too childish. It was a nice blend and made an adult such as me happy to read it.

I would recommend any of Quinn’s books to people. The story is the typical evil against good, however the way she tells it is not typical. Quinn creates a great adventure and takes the reader along for the ride. It is a feel good story and is nice to read and escape from the real world for a while. Link is below! Happy reading and get lost Inside a good book!
Nothing terribly original here, but the lead characters are not very interesting. The heroine's BFF Elora is much more interesting than the heroine Cassie is, and there's more humor and life in the quickie flashes of Cassie's dad than in the angsty hero Trik (what a terrible name!).

What annoyed me most was the casual dialogue between Trik and Cassie. On Earth, Trik uses the same words/phrases as any human would - but never does it when in Faerie! Having a Fae hero say casually, "Hey, it's okay, beautiful," but in Faerie he speaks with long, poetic eloquence - "I will follow you to the ends of any realm. Never has there been and never will there be anyone who holds my heart as you do, " - let's just say the contrast was like getting whiplash!

It's a sweet story, but there's just not a lot of depth or originality to it. Not interested in continuing the series, or anything else by this author.
One of the biggest problems I had with this book is that the characters all sound the same - royalty vs teen girl, thousand(s) year old vs 18 year old, etc.

The second problem I had was the mix up in homophones hall/haul, site/sight, etc.

Otherwise, decent read. I felt the ending was a little anti-climatic.